Well, I lied.
I'm not really gonna post my first chapter. I had a moment of genius right before I fell asleep last night, and I changed it. And it's much better now. So, I don't need your help. But thanks anyway.
I just thought I would tell cyber-space this, jsut in case there really is anyone out there watching eagerly for the next five pages. Sorry, but you shoulda said something. I'm feeling pretty lonely on this whole blog thing. So...I'm gonna go actually get something done now.